Teen sensation Justin Bieber has just finished his North American tour, filming his very first movie, and guest staring in the hit TV show CSI. Fans have just been going crazy over this kid.
“ Ya I would consider myself a big fan”
" Oh I love him he is such a talented kid and very attractive."
Now what’s next for this world wide teen sensation? He is writing a book that is said to come out in October, and fans are looking forward to it.
"What? He wrote a book?. wow that’s great! I’m excited now"
“i am very excited! I’m gonna get it on the first day it comes out!"
“I’m looking forward to read it!”
“ i think it shows how he is very successful”
“even though he is only 16 he has already achieved a lot in his life already”
See fans are already so excited to read this 16 year olds life story. He might be one of the youngest writers to have a number one selling book.
I would change the "Fans have just been going crazy over this kid!" It sounds really awkward.
ReplyDeleteYou say they are looking forward to the book, but your first interview said they didn't even know...
I don't like the ending. First, get rid of See... it's not needed.
"Fans are highly anticipating the upcoming release of this teen pop sensation's new book. He could potentially be one of the youngest writers to have a number one selling book."
But different?
Also, capitalization and punctuation!!
Your first comment about his book says they didn;t know about the book. thats a little confusing?
ReplyDeleteGet rid of see in the conclusion.
Hun, you should work on your grammer overall.